Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

The transportation systems play

crucial

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role in communication between domestics and overseas. Governments have

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enormous money in developing the infrastructures in favour of

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the livelihood

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of citizens. I completely agree with

this

statement and

also

will indicate the advantages of payment with

railways

constructions.

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with, the

railways

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railway's

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structures are

attractive

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tourists who come across to other countries and motivates developing economics because it supports in travelling in

place

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where cannot drive own vehicles to there and

also

perceives a beautiful scenery around these nations.

This

structure has many routes in getting to the ancient cities in order to conceive architectures, equipment and their existence.

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, Thailand has

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one

of

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secret

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tourist

destination

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and

being

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a famous area for other ones including domestic people. So, if

tourisms

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desire to travel

this

one, they will have to get on the train.

Therefore

, when a substantial number of travels occurs the

highly

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income in

this

state.

Furthermore

, another benefit in building

railways

reduce greenhouse

gases

due to

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cause

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the cause

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of global warming. Automobiles have released toxic

gases

to

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into

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the atmosphere

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atmosphere

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such

as Carbon dioxide, Carbon monoxide and methane. These

gases

are

a

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main cause of damaging atmosphere and affect to human which

are

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the problem over the world. While trains release hardly toxic

gases

and

also

utilizes

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biochemical oil

that is

conservation environments.

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, Southeast Asia has an annual report regarding

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amount of releasing

gases

as a result

, trains have a volume of poison

gases

less than other vehicles.

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,

this

one

assist

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people and animals in favour of stay

inner

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world. To summarize, I believe the government should invest in

railways

more than other structures because of improving finances in domestic as well as decreases a major issue of world. So, the government should collaborate with large organizations for influence in save the planet.