I In some countries, many young people choose to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages.

In a number of societies, hard work is taken into account as a productive power engine to persuade juveniles to achieve whatever they desire. While there are a number of drawbacks associated with

this

idea, in my opinion, its merits are more substantial. On the one hand, the potential disadvantage might be the sense of dissatisfaction after each collapse. The existence of breakdown in each aim is inevitable, and youth should be aware of the fact that their hardworking might cause a failure. If

children

constantly are told to try hard to fulfil their goals regardless of the real-life circumstances, they will be dissatisfied after the preliminary failure. Thereby, it might be logical that they would be reluctant to pursue their other aims.

On the other hand

, a major advantage of convincing

children

with determination is increasing of sense of fulfilment in them. It is obvious that achieving a goal, even a minor one, opens up numerous options for

children

to keep their perseverance in

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of other significant aims.

For instance

, getting a high score with immense studying will bring several beneficial influences on students' unconscious minds to be more industrious in the future. A

further

benefit is providing

children

with real-life conditions. Undoubtedly, a child can acquire more experiences after each attempt, and these constructive experiences play pivotal roles in having much better consequences of hardworking in the future. On balance, it is true that advising

children

to try hard to fulfil their goals would seem disadvantageous under certain circumstances, I believe its benefits in terms of sense of fulfilment and getting more experience to override its disadvantages.