You were doing a short course at another country. All of a sudden, you had to leave the course and fly back to your home country. Write a letter to your teacher, and in your letter – express your gratitude – explain why you had to leave – explain what part of the course you enjoyed the most

✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?

Dear Ana, Hope

this

Linking Words

letter finds you in radiant health and the best of spirits.

This

Linking Words

letter is being written to you to express my extreme gratitude for being a part of

such

Linking Words

an amazing short

course

Use synonyms

. I am a student of your short

course

Use synonyms

named Best techniques in Dental implants . I am extremely overwhelmed with joy to learn under your guidance. All new techniques and theory concepts really going to help me in my clinical practice. It would not be wrong to say that

this

Linking Words

is one of the best decisions I made in my life. In fact, I really do not want to leave the

course

Use synonyms

in between but there was no other option for me as my grandfather got a heart attack and was admitted to the intensive care unit of the hospital . For taking care of him I had to leave the

course

Use synonyms

and fly back to my home country . Everything about the

course

Use synonyms

was world-class but one thing which I personally enjoyed the most was putting implants in a patient's mouth . All your patients dealing techniques are outstanding and it will really help me to become a better dentist in the future. I pen down by thanking you again for the wonderful experience I had. Yours Sincerely Manvir Kaur

Manvir kaur bhattiWed Nov 03 2021

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site's author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

2
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

0123456789.0505

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

218 words

🚀 Prepare for IELTS writing section today!

Unlimited Task 1 & Task 2 checks
Practice with essays, charts, and letters.
Personalized suggestions & mistake analysis
Spot every mistake and boost your score.
Topic ideas & vocabulary helpers
Expand your ideas and use the right words.
Progress tracking
Watch your writing improve with every practice.

What to do next:

Look at other essays:

5
band
The position of women in society has changed markedly in the last twenty years. many of the problems young people now experience such as juvenile delinquency, arise from the fact that many married women now work and are not at home to care for their children. to what extent do you agree or disagree with this option?
Internationally the women position have significantly changed in the last two decades, although this has boosted the world ecomony quite a bit, but this change have caused direct impact on children personal growth resulting in juvenile deliquency and other such problems. I partly agree with this statement as the women position in a family has changed, I believe men should understand the change the family dynamic and support family in other ways than financially. This essay will describe this change with reasoned examples.
6
band
Around the world, rural people are moving to cities and urban areas, so populations in the countryside are decreasing. Is this a positive or negative development?
In recent decades, there has been a significant trend of rural inhabitants migrating to urban areas, leading to a decline in the population of the countryside. This phenomenon has sparked debates about whether it constitutes a positive or negative development. In my opinion, while urbanization brings various benefits, it also poses challenges that need to be addressed.
7
band
You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to study/work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In the letter: describe the situation explain your problems and why it is difficult to study/work say what kind of accommodation you would prefer You should write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this to request a new room for accommodation due to various problems which are faced due to my roommate.
4.5
band
Teenagers in some nations work at jobs while they are still in school. Do you think it is a good idea for students to have jobs ? Use specific examples and reasons to explain your answer
Nowadays, in some countries teenagers are working while still attending school. It is hard and complex topic, and in general the idea is great, however it depends from how it may be executed. I personally think that if teenagers would not be overworked, then that activity is beneficial for their development.
6.5
band
some people say that that adversiting is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things.other people think that advertining is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both views and give your opinoin
Advertising is a system which is made to give a strong desire for any kind of product. A number of people work carefully on it and investigate exactly how actually our brain works. It is believed that we can not control this process and will buy on impulse over and over again. On the other hand, other people believe in society's consciousness and that any advertising will not persuade us to do silly things, especially shopping. This essay looks at both sides and gives its own opinion.

You were doing a short course at another country. All of a sudden, you had to leave the course and fly back to your home country. Write a letter to your teacher, and in your letter – express your gratitude – explain why you had to leave – explain what part of the course you enjoyed the most

Around the world, rural people are moving to cities and urban areas, so populations in the countryside are decreasing. Is this a positive or negative development?

Teenagers in some nations work at jobs while they are still in school. Do you think it is a good idea for students to have jobs ? Use specific examples and reasons to explain your answer

some people say that that adversiting is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things.other people think that advertining is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both views and give your opinoin