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Some people think that they should spend money they earn now enjoying life while other think that the money should be put into saving for future. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Some
people
 think it better to spend and enjoy their
money
 once they earn it but others disagree and think it is better to save their
money
 and enjoy it in the
future
. In my opinion, I think saving
money
 for the
future
 is the more profitable plan. Some groups of
people
 often spend their
money
 without keeping it for later uses.
For example
, a lot of young couples often take multiple trips abroad without having any
future
 plans or savings
money
 for their
future
unlike
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 their parents.
This
 way may cause a huge loss to them in the coming financial crises.
However
, there are still a lot of
people
 who save and divide
money
in
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 different groups for fulfilling their dreams in the
future
. Generally, these groups of
people
 tend to have enough
money
 to deal with unknown crises.
For example
, in
India
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 there has been evidence of saving gold and cash so that their children can have a comfortable life. In conclusion, everyone has different beliefs about ways of living their life and spending
money
 and there is nothing wrong
in
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 spending
money
 without saving, but in my
opinion
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save
Wrong verb form
saving
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money
 for the
future
 is better than using it now and nothing for the
future
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • live in the moment
  • instant gratification
  • leisure activities
  • make memories
  • relieve stress
  • boost mental well-being
  • support local economy
  • wealth accumulation
  • financial stability
  • emergency funds
  • retirement savings
  • major life events
  • weigh the pros and cons
  • strike a balance
  • long-term perspective
  • financial preparedness
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