Some people think that they should spend money they earn now enjoying life while other think that the money should be put into saving for future. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some

people

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think it better to spend and enjoy their

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once they earn it but others disagree and think it is better to save their

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and enjoy it in the

future

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. In my opinion, I think saving

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for the

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is the more profitable plan. Some groups of

people

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often spend their

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without keeping it for later uses.

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, a lot of young couples often take multiple trips abroad without having any

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plans or savings

money

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for their

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their parents.

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way may cause a huge loss to them in the coming financial crises.

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, there are still a lot of

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who save and divide

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different groups for fulfilling their dreams in the

future

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. Generally, these groups of

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tend to have enough

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to deal with unknown crises.

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, in

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there has been evidence of saving gold and cash so that their children can have a comfortable life. In conclusion, everyone has different beliefs about ways of living their life and spending

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and there is nothing wrong

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spending

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without saving, but in my

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save

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money

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for the

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is better than using it now and nothing for the

future

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.