You saw an advertise in a newspaper about a vacancy in a local restaurant, searching for a chef to their kitchen. You would like to do some work at the diner. Write a letter to the owner of the restaurant saying you would like to work at his business. In your letter: • explain why you would like to do this kind of work (1) • say what type of work you have experience with (2) • give details on how the owner may contact you. (3)

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to express my interest in your advertised job in the kitchen of your restaurant, to work as a chef. Enclosed in
this
email, there is a copy of my resume in order to show you my professional background and
further
qualifications. I am graduated from the University of Toronto, with a bachelor degree in Cooking. I am currently working as a chef auxiliary in the Jambo's Diner, but I had already worked in Pizza Hut's at -Charleton Avenue, as a waitress, previously, where I gained the experience of dealing with customers. Not only due to my personality and qualifications already mentioned, but I guarantee I can do suit the vacancy for
this
job because I am a team player, who cook delicious meals that will make anyone feel at home and always pleasure the clients making them come back for more flavours. I am
also
a resourceful person
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since I am able to deal with the most diverse circumstances, prepared to work with the ingredients that I have at the moment, as much as I keep my place of work organized and clean. I would like to meet with you at your earliest convenience, to discuss the possibility of working at your restaurant. I can be reached by the phone number 685 947 2341 any day of the week or through
this
email address which I am sending
this
message to you. I am
also
looking forward to meeting you in the near future. Yours faithfully, Anna
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