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In Spite Of The Advances Made In Agriculture, Many People Still Go Hungry

#spite #advances #agriculture #people
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,
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 the
world
have
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 witnessed a great advancement in
agriculture
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the agriculture
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 industry, there are still
nemorous
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numerous
 people all over the
world
 who are hungry. There are some reasons for that, whereas some action which can be done. The two main reasons for hunger are population boom and
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overconsumption
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over consumption
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overconsumption
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.
First
, it is true that agriculture
have
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 achieved great advances, yet it is not enough to provide
food
 for everyone; and even if it was, the number of countries accessing
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are
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 not noticeable.
In addition
,
everyday
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 a large amount of
food
 is thrown out by people and restaurants all over the
world
.
For instance
, almost every restaurant in prosperous
neighborhoods
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neighbourhoods
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 cooks
food
 more than its
nesessity
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necessity
 which can result in more throwing out
food
.
However
, there are some potential measurements
which
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 can be done to tackle
above
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the above
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. Education, with
long- term
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 impacts
in
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 both sides, is the
first
 one. It can control the birth rates in developing and poor countries;
also
 can decrease over-consumption in the
next
 generation.
Secondly
,
in
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developed countries, in which
food
 is produced more than needed, should help undeveloped ones, with the shortage of
food
. In
this
 way, the more proportion of
world
 could have at least one meal a day. In conclusion, as
the
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agriculture
have
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 many advances, because of the more increasing population level and
food
 throwing away, the scarcity of
food
 still
remain
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 a global issue. Some action should be done immediately,
otherwise
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 it becomes more serious in
next
 decades.
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