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Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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Music
, which is considered
as
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the most popular
art
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 in the world, has been becoming a nice way to bring people
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 different ages and cultures together. I strongly agree with
this
 opinion.
This
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my
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 considerations that support my agreement.
To begin
 with,
music
 was used by people from different cultures to make a
distinguished
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 characteristic of their culture. Many people across the world, for so long, has been making their own tunes.
Music
 is
also
 becoming an integral part of
country’s
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 independence declaration. Every country has their own national anthem to unite their citizen.
Music
 is a symbol of pride in the context of
this
 unity.
On the other hand
,
music
 has been becoming a specific knowledge, as well as
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fieldwork. Everyone can earn money from getting themselves specialized in
music
.
For instance
, there is a profession
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 specializes in
music
 like
music
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 director, composer, vocal director,
music
 arranger, singer, and many more. Each job has
their
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 own specific skill that differs
with
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 the others.
Furthermore
,
in
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the
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 larger scale,
music
 is an entertainment industry that could give
a
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leverage to the economy because it will involve other professions with a great number of workers. To conclude, I reiterate that
music
 plays a significant role in preserving culture and nationalism, as well as delivering a great impact
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 the economy of the country.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • universal language
  • evoke
  • connect
  • diverse audiences
  • cultural exchange
  • generational gaps
  • shared experiences
  • unifying force
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