the water usage in two various cities (San Diego County and California) compared to Worldwide.

The given pie charts illustrate the information about the
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usage
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in two various cities (
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Diego
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County and
California
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) compared to Worldwide. The general overview here is that all two cities used the most
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for residential, and the least amount of
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usage
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was used for agriculture in
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Diego
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and
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.
In contrast
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, in the other parts of the world agriculture are the most
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usage
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. According to the charts, it can be seen that
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Diego
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and
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used about 60% and 39% respectively of their
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for residential compared to only 8% Worldwide.
On the contrary
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, roughly 69% of
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was used by the rest of the world, which was dramatically more than
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Diego
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and
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who used only 17
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and 28% consecutively.
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,
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indicated a high figure of
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usage
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for industry, accounting for 33%.
on the other hand
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, Worldwide and
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Diego
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shared a similar figure of a mere 23% of
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figure over the observed period.

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