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Some people say that computers have made life easier and more convenient. Other people say that computers have made life more complex and stressful. What is your opinion?

#people #computers #life
Nowadays we can'
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life without
computers
.Everything around us is involved in technology: work, home, entertainment, security, communications, medicine, education. When
computers
 emerging was used only for scientific
purpose
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, to make huge calculus in some hours or days, in that time no one imagined
than
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 only 60 years later, everybody would have a computer in
the
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 hand and make the same calculus in some seconds.
Computers
 not only are the traditional equipment that consists in keyboard, screen and CPU
,
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 but
also
, tiny microchips that can be in small artefacts are considered
computers
. In our present, some activities can not
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 without the use of them, since simple things like the timer in traffic
ligths
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 until more complex situations like medical diagnosis, banking transactions , or prevents some
catrastophes
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 by knowing weather conditions. Most of the time the life depends on the use of them. In my personal situation, I am a computer professional as a consequence I can not conceive my job without
computers
, in
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 I couldn'
t
 do my work. As well in
this
 pandemic situation thanks to the
computers
 many activities could be done from home and many activities could continue.
As
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a
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conclusion
on one hand
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the use of technology in many areas
is improve
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 our way of living, make
the
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life easier.
On the other
hand
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 our
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lives
lifes
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 have a huge
depending
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of
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the
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computers
 and we don'
t
 know how to live without them. If these
weren'
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t
 exist, we probably could not survive in the actual world.
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