It’s time to ban social media. It has been shown that it has made life worse for people all over the world, from politics, to self-image, to the spread of disinformation. It is a social experiment that has not worked and it is time to say goodbye.To what extent do you agree with the above statement?

Social media is a tool that brings many benefits to people.
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, work and play are all through social
networks
.
However
, nowadays, with the development of social
networks
, people are becoming
more and more lazy
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lazier and lazier
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. We are being too dependent on social
networks
, people are communicating less and less with each other, which leads to a younger generation becoming insensitive.
Although
social
networks
bring a lot of benefits, if we use them without control, we will abuse and become dependent on
it
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. If I had a wish, I would like to return to the life of 10 years ago, I really want to part with social
networks
, but because now a lot of important and necessary information is used on social
networks
, I cannot give it up.
Instead
, I will know how to manage my time and use it in the most reasonable and effective way.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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