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Some people believe that government should take care of old people whereas others oppose this view.Discuss both the views and give your opinion

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Aging
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 has presented individuals with a number of challenges and problems. None of which is too rudimentary to ignore. Whilst the majority of
people
 are of the opinion that the massive burden of looking after
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old persons is on the shoulders of
government
, there is a group of
people
 who opines
government
 has no responsibility for old persons. as it comes to me, authorities should place a high value on
elderly
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the elderly
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 and support them.In
this
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 I will discuss both views. On the one hand, so seriously has
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 life expectancy in the elderly affected some individual’s mind that they suppose
government
 should provide suitable facilities for them and
Improve
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 their quality of life. Studies show in the U.S.A,which is a developed country,old
people
 live longer since they have a higher standard of living.
Moreover
, they can be able to afford
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domestic help provided that
government
suports
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supports
 them financially, even if they are abandoned by their children.
Consequently
, They have a happier and better quality of life.
On the other
hand
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 supporting them is costly. In some countries where there is a large population of elderly
people
vast
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 amount of money must go on looking after them and these costs not only can cause many problems for authorities,
such
 as lack of budget
,
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 but
also
 can lead to discrimination between different generations.
This
 group
also
 supposes if the
government
 took care of old
people
 their lives would be aimless and meaningless because keeping to try standing on their own knees and working make their lives meaningful and purposeful.
furthermore
, it can keep them much more active.
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