New parents should attend parent courses to bring up their children well. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is noticeable that having and raising a child are struggle by newly become father and mother, and parenting class become more popular to help them. Personally, I disagree with
this
statement for many reasons that will be discussed in the following paragraphs.
To begin
with, there are many aspects that parenting skills would be useful to provide mothers and fathers in-depth knowledge about how to raise children
’s growth. Since that every stage of a toddler has a different way to have proper development. In addition
, this
course equips basic medical training and other skills that support new parents
to protect their children
from diseases. The existence of this
medical training stems from the carelessness of parents
and also
the lack of parenting skills. As an illustration, if the infant has a fever, parents
will have to take quick action or first
aid.
On the other hand
, it might be said that taking part in beneficial courses should not be compulsory for parents
who are living in under
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Furthermore
, instead
of attending the class, they prefer to seek for elderly’s advice. Seeing that senior age have many experience and expert in caregivers for children
. For instance
, a recommendation from them to handle behaviour children
’s tantrums is to try to stay calm and do not yell or hit the children
.
In conclusion, asking Correct your spelling
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without paying for attending parenting class for some people is an extra cost.Submitted by mellindanur.octavia on
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