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New parents should attend parent courses to bring up their children well. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#parents #parent #courses #children
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It is noticeable that having and raising a child are struggle by newly become father and mother, and parenting class become more popular to help them. Personally, I disagree with
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 statement for many reasons that will be discussed in the following paragraphs.
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 with, there are many aspects that parenting skills would be useful to provide mothers and fathers in-depth knowledge about how to raise
children
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’s growth. Since that every stage of a toddler has a different way to have proper development.
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,
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 course equips basic medical training and other skills that support new
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 to protect their
children
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 from diseases. The existence of
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 medical training stems from the carelessness of
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 and
also
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 the lack of parenting skills. As an illustration, if the infant has a fever,
parents
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 will have to take quick action or
first
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 aid.
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, it might be said that taking part in beneficial courses should not be compulsory for
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 who are living in
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the
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poverty can not
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afford
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 pay the tuition fee, other primary needs has to be accomplished.
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,
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 of attending the class, they prefer to seek for elderly’s advice. Seeing that senior age have many experience and expert in caregivers for
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.
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, a recommendation from them to handle behaviour
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’s tantrums is to try to stay calm and do not yell or hit the
children
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. In conclusion, asking
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advice
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advices
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advice
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 from
long life
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 experience people in
family
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 are easier and more suitable to ensure the growth of the
children
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 without paying for attending parenting class for some people is an extra cost.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • foundational knowledge
  • child development
  • effective communication
  • healthy eating habits
  • nutrition
  • non-punitive discipline
  • positive family environment
  • stress management
  • safety training
  • support networks
  • encourage independence
  • self-reliance
  • work-life balance
  • cultural sensitivity
  • diverse parenting practices
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