You recently went on holiday and your friend lent you a travel guidebook. Write a letter to friend. In your letter . tell your friend about the holiday . explain how the guidebook was helpful . say when and how you will return the guidebook.

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Dear Tiffany, I hope

this

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letter finds you well. You know very well

last

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week I went on

vocation

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vacation

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your favourite place which is California. I am excited to tell my holiday trip,

this

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trip gave a plethora of happiness to

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apply

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and

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apply

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my family

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apply

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also

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, we

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apply

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were

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apply

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stayed

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for

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for

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one week and

almost

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apply

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many iconic places were visited especially the historic museum

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which was

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the icing on the trip. I used your guidebook in many locations,

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have

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helped more to me because the

forst

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first

time I went

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California and I didn't know about the visiting locations,

how

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or how

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to reach the venues

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cheap

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a cheap

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cost.

Everthing

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Everything

was included in your guidebook.

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helped a lot. Certainly, I will give

your

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you your

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book

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apply

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this

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weekend

saturday

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Saturday

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at your house, yes I will come to your home

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I will give you. I would be grateful if you would arrange any

plan

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for us, we will

take

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have

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some fun at

weekend

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the weekend

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. I look forward to receiving your response as soon as possible. Thank you, Best regards, Paige.

reanudeepanFri Nov 05 2021

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task response

Address all three points in the prompt: holiday description, guidebook's help, and returning guidebook.

coherence and cohesion

Use appropriate paragraphing and improve the structure of greeting and closing.

lexical resource

Expand the range of vocabulary, use more precise words, and correct word usage and spelling errors.

grammatical range

Use a wider range of grammatical structures, correct verb tense usage, and sentence structure errors.

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0
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

177 words

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Gratitude
Breathtaking
Insights
Invaluable
Local cuisine
Navigating
Off-the-beaten-path
Anecdotes
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Reconnect
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Courier
Itinerary
Landmarks
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