You recently went on holiday and your friend lent you a travel guidebook. Write a letter to friend. In your letter . tell your friend about the holiday . explain how the guidebook was helpful . say when and how you will return the guidebook.
Dear Tiffany,
I hope
this
letter finds you well. You know very well last
week I went on vocation
Correct your spelling
vacation
in
your favourite place which is California. I am excited to tell my holiday trip, Change preposition
to
this
trip gave a plethora of happiness to me
Correct pronoun usage
apply
and
my familyCorrect word choice
apply
Rephrase
apply
also
, we Unnecessary verb
apply
were
stayed Verb problem
apply
Change preposition
for
in
one week and Change preposition
for
almost
many iconic places were visited especially the historic museum Rephrase
apply
is
the icing on the trip.
I used your guidebook in many locations, Verb problem
which was
this
have
helped more to me because the Change the verb form
has
forst
time I went Correct your spelling
first
in
California and I didn't know about the visiting locations, Change preposition
to
how
to reach the venues Correct word choice
or how
in
Change preposition
at
cheap
cost. Correct article usage
a cheap
Everthing
was included in your guidebook. Correct your spelling
Everything
This
helped a lot.
Certainly, I will give your
book Correct pronoun usage
you your
in
Change preposition
apply
this
weekend saturday
at your house, yes I will come to your home Change the capitalization
Saturday
while
I will give you. I would be grateful if you would arrange any plan
for us, we will Fix the agreement mistake
plans
take
some fun at Verb problem
have
weekend
.
I look forward to receiving your response as soon as possible.
Thank you,
Best regards,
Paige.Add an article
the weekend
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task response
Address all three points in the prompt: holiday description, guidebook's help, and returning guidebook.
coherence and cohesion
Use appropriate paragraphing and improve the structure of greeting and closing.
lexical resource
Expand the range of vocabulary, use more precise words, and correct word usage and spelling errors.
grammatical range
Use a wider range of grammatical structures, correct verb tense usage, and sentence structure errors.