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Writing: People nowadays tend to have children at older ages. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

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Today, there is a tendency for people to give birth and start families at a later stage in their lives. On balance, it seems there are more drawbacks. Despite these disadvantages, there are certain benefits that can be encapsulated under the umbrella of stability, both: financial and familial. As a couple progresses in
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 they should have greater financial resources to draw upon to support their
children
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 and reduce the negative impact on poverty.
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 to the financial stability, there’s
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 stability in the family which should increase as the couple matures.
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,
children
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 born at a later stage are less vulnerable to the negative consequences of divorce and family break up which are less common in older pairings.
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 the aforementioned positive aspects appear to have great strength, there are
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 significant negative factors to consider. Foremost, as people age, they suffer from a greater amount of genetic degradation which can increase the chances of having a child with a genetic defect
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 as Down's syndrome. Another factor that can have a detrimental effect on a child’s quality of
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 is the fact that older people tend to have less energy which means they are less able to cope with and raise their relatively more energetic young
children
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. In the same way, there is
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 a generation gap in terms of relatability. As the age gap between the child and the parents increases their ability to relate to each other and share the same ideas about
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 could be placed under severe pressure.
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 may have negative consequences on the child’s upbringing and development.
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, there could be numerous intra-family conflicts between youngsters and their elderly parents. In sum, given the greater number of negative elements in comparison to the smaller number of positive aspects of giving birth at an older stage in
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, it is reasonable to conclude that it is more beneficial to conceive and raise
children
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 at a relatively earlier age.
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