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You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you realized you had left some important documents at the hotel. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter: Explain the situation Describe the documents Say what action you would like the manager to take You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir/Madam,

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Dear Sir/Madam, I hope you are doing well. My name is Shweta Bhat, and has recently attended a meeting at the Taj Hotel. I am writing
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 letter to inform you I have left some important
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 at the hotel. I remember we were having the meeting in a hall which is on the ground floor near an elevator. in between the meeting, I received a call from my friend that my grandmother had been admitted to hospital so I rushed from there quickly and forgot to collect my
documents
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 from the table. The
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 are in a black colour folder and outside the folder my name is printed. The folder
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 has our company logo on the top right corner. I would appreciate it if you could send me the
documents
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 as soon as possible either by Canada Post or by UPS at the address 235 Burlington Building, Kitchener. Looking forward to hearing from you. Thank you. Yours faithfully, Shweta Bhat.

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Coherence & Cohesion
Incorporate more connectors and transition words to enhance flow.
Accuracy
Ensure to check for minor grammatical errors for a polished finish.
Coherence & Cohesion
The greeting and closing are appropriately formal.
Task Achievement
The tone is suitably polite and appropriate for the context.
Task Achievement
The description of the documents is clear and specific, helping in the action required.
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