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Although more and more people read news on the Internet, newspapers will remain the most important source of news. Do you agree or disagree?

#people #news #internet #newspapers #source
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In the era of technology, every aspect of human's life is dominated by the internet,
therefore
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 the masses prefer social networks to get updated with the current
news
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 and consider
newspapers
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 as a cliche method.
However
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, there is a massive population that consider
newspaper
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 as the principal source of
information
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 about current affairs. I wholeheartedly believe that
newspapers
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 are the most popular and salient origin of
news
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.
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 with,
although
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 the internet is extensively available around the world, there are some places where network connections have not been reached so far.,
Consequently
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 the
newspaper
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 is the single option available for the bulletin to these citizens.
Besides
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this
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, printed media is considered the most reliable and authentic derivation of
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.
For instance
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, a single article has to go through various audits by different
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 correspondents, editors and supervisors. Due to
this
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 ,filtration the chance of propagating faulty
news
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 becomes nearly out of question.
Moreover
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, printed
news
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 source comprises
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 on various subjects.
Hence
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 people prefer
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newspapers
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 to gain complete
information
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. Apart from
this
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, the
newspaper
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 is approachable to each section of society for ,example elderly people who are aware of technology can read the current affairs by printed one, as well as someone who is not much wealthy and can not afford to have a system , could buy a
newspaper
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 with very less money. To conclude, the internet is easily available to each of us and widely used but
newspapers
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 will always remain the imperative and definitive source of the newscast.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • reliable
  • credible
  • focused
  • immersive
  • tangibility
  • tradition
  • access
  • digital devices
  • demographics
  • older generation
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