In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating much fast food. It is therefore, necessary for governments to impose higher tax on this kind of food. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

A portion of the world's population is suffering from illnesses resulting from the consumption of fast
food
.Some
people
feel that governments should impose a high
tax
on
such
food
.
This
essay will discuss in agreement with the general statement and a conclusion will be provided at the end.
To begin
with,fast
food
is cheap that's why indolent
people
will always prefer taking them to prepare their own meals.
This
behaviour becomes habitual with time
hence
developing to lifestyle.
For example
,french fries sold in the streets goes at only one hundred shillings which seems cheaper than cooking a well-balanced diet.They are loaded with a lot of starch and fats which when ingested can cause serious health effects in the long run.If the government can impose a high
tax
on them,they will become more expensive than other healthy alternatives
hence
making consumers' interest shift to more beneficial feeds.
Moreover
,eating a lot of fast
food
lowers life expectancy.As it is said,the poorer you eat the lesser you live.For,instance,those
people
who eat junk
food
which costs less compared to other
food
tend to develop heart disease
hence
shortening their life compared to those who rely on healthy
home-made
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meals.
Thus
,imposing
tax
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on
such
food
will be of great benefit as it will limit the amount one can eat at a time since it's costly to take much
hence
improving
people
's lives. In conclusion,all governments should come up with strategies for regulating the consumption of fast
food
by imposing
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a tax
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tax
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taxes
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on them.
This
will make it unaffordable
hence
moderating the portions consumed per time.
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