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In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating much fast food. It is therefore, necessary for governments to impose higher tax on this kind of food. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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A portion of the world's population is suffering from illnesses resulting from the consumption of fast
food
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.Some
people
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 feel that governments should impose a high
tax
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 on
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food
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 with,fast
food
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 is cheap that's why indolent
people
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 will always prefer taking them to prepare their own meals.
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 behaviour becomes habitual with time
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 developing to lifestyle.
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,french fries sold in the streets goes at only one hundred shillings which seems cheaper than cooking a well-balanced diet.They are loaded with a lot of starch and fats which when ingested can cause serious health effects in the long run.If the government can impose a high
tax
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 on them,they will become more expensive than other healthy alternatives
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 making consumers' interest shift to more beneficial feeds.
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,eating a lot of fast
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 lowers life expectancy.As it is said,the poorer you eat the lesser you live.For,instance,those
people
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 who eat junk
food
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 which costs less compared to other
food
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 tend to develop heart disease
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 shortening their life compared to those who rely on healthy
home-made
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homemade
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 meals.
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,imposing
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tax
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a tax
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 on
such
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food
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 will be of great benefit as it will limit the amount one can eat at a time since it's costly to take much
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 improving
people
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's lives. In conclusion,all governments should come up with strategies for regulating the consumption of fast
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 by imposing
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a tax
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tax
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 on them.
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 will make it unaffordable
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 moderating the portions consumed per time.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • public health
  • obesity
  • diabetes
  • heart disease
  • health outcomes
  • healthcare costs
  • consumer behavior
  • socio-economic backgrounds
  • ethical implications
  • public health campaigns
  • subsidies
  • regulations
  • nutritional content
  • healthier food options
  • government intervention
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