Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

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of difficult

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, different personalities would pose

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of attitudes toward their problems,

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the story of carrot, coffee and egg. Numerous people agree and adapt to their situation,

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, others always find

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ways to overcome it. My essay will represent two viewpoints,

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by my own idea about

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issue. On the one hand, the one who is easy-satisfied might find adapting the best solution for all

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.

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, their first reaction to the new unsatisfying information may be a surprise,

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by a calm and normalized attitude.

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lifestyle advantage is the ability to adapt in every environment, they accept both thick and thin in their life as a certain.

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, their spirit is comfortable and easily overcome difficulties.

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, they are commonly considered undeveloped

personality

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by colleagues and

chairman

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.

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people usually underestimate them and they don't reach an advanced position in

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career

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.

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manner individuals always effort to overcome difficulties they meet

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. The harder life is, the harder they try. In their mind, there is supposed to be no place for giving up,

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optimistic

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attitude is

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crucial key to either

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improving

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improve

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the circumstance or

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develop

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their instinct and skills.

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sort of

people

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is usually

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appreciated

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their

enthusiasticsm

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enthusiasts

and easily

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to

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level in their career.

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in some cases of extremely harsh

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, they are boosted to be on the verge of collapse.

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my own perspective, I am attracted by those enthusiastic colleagues whose power and energy spread to

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vibe.