Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Climate change has always been an important issue across the world. In that concept, multiple environmental problems emerge as a warning caution to humankind. In
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, numerous people argue that the extinction of some floral and animal
species
should be prioritized; others,
however
, claim for more serious problems in
this
scenario. My essay will explain both mentioned sides, followed by my personal idea. On the one hand, the vanish of multiple
species
has been an urgent effect of bad
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resulting from climate change. Since each kind of
creatures
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contribute
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to a tight
food-chain
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, one broken point would lead to
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destruction of all other kinds.
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, oceanic coral in some
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is on the verge of extinction due to pollution,
this
could lead to
shortage
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of food
source
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for fish,
then
their vanish is unavoidable.
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, global protection should apply
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all sorts of plants and animals in order to prevent
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alarming
species
loss. On the
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hand, people nowadays are threatened by much more serious troubles caused by environmental destruction. To illustrate,
covid-19
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pandemic is
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severe disaster
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, causing death to millions of individuals.
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tiny virus has been working as an enormous alert to the world. Since human
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do
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not protect
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appropriately, we might face
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terrible events resulting from releasing
acient
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virus in permanent ice-berg or unexpecting muting of harmful bacteria.
Thus
, it is reasonable to listen to recent environmental activists. In my own view,
although
floral and animal extinction is an undeniable problem, people have to prepare for more unpredictable severe global disaster in which human being is the
species
to extinct.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • biodiversity
  • extinction
  • habitat loss
  • ecosystem
  • food chain
  • imbalance
  • interconnected
  • climate change
  • pollution
  • personal actions
  • policy changes
  • education
  • awareness
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