with increased in global demand in oil and gas, undiscover areas of the world should be opened up to access more resources. To what extent do you agree?

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fossil fuels,

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of the globe should be opened to reach

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opinion because the industries and transport of the

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on fossil fuel or

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oil. The main reason why I believe to detect these

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fossil fuels are

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to generate

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most of the

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industries is running by

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to produce some consumable products. As well as

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is essential for domestic, Hospitals and

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part in producing plastic. Another reason why I believe to explore these

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treasures is, that the transport industry

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fuel to transfer the goods from one country to another country, or from one city to another city.

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is because among countries the transportation modes are water, air, or roads and for all the modes heavy

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are required and those heavy

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need fuel to run. As well as

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that the high global requirement

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zone of the globe should be opened up to approach more

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and

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is because to generate more electricity and

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industry. Given

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situation, it seems that the organization of

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exporting countries need to hire more exploring companies and provide every necessary facility to them to reach out these resources and

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