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some people think that everyone has the right to have access to university education, and that government should make it free for all students no matter what financial background they have. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion.

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Education
 is the key to the development of the
nation
.
Therefore
, no matter what the students have financial stability or not, they should be provided with a University
education
.
Although
 there are negative arguments about
this
also
, I strongly agree that the government should make free University
education
 to
everyone
. The essay will discuss both sides of the arguments in the following paragraphs.
To begin
 with, offering free
education
 will help middle-class people to achieve their dream.
For example
, many talented students are not getting a chance to hire a course of their interest because of unimaginable capital fees. Due to
this
, many intelligent students are compromising their dream of becoming a Doctor or Collector and they lead their life by killing their aspirations. Offering free professional
education
 will definitely help these people in all ways. To continue with, educating the public will help for the economic growth of the
nation
. To elaborate, when
everyone
 gets educated, they will definitely be an asset for the
nation
 because they will use their knowledge for the development of their country.
For example
, the CEO of Google is an Indian origin and he is serving another
nation
 because of the lack of job opportunities in India. To summarize, if
everyone
 gets educated freely in their
nation
, they will feel patriotic to serve their
nation
.
Finally
, if the government take the initiation to provide free
education
 to
everyone
 the country will develop soon like other developed countries. So, in my viewpoint, I strongly agree with the side of people who support free University
education
 for
everyone
.
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