You have had a problem with your next-door neighbour. You have not been able to speak to your neighbour about this. Write a letter to this neighbour. In you letter - explain the problem - suggest a solution - say what action you will take if the situation does not improve.

Dear Madam, I hope

this

letter finds you in good health. I am writing

this

letter to give me a favour for my serious request regarding your air-con issue. The reason why is that there has been leaking

water

to my room day in day out for almost a week.

In addition

this

, the air-con pipe has been frequently waving on my window along with

water

flow. Because of that, I cannot open my master bedroom window and the

water

leaking case is now tending to destroy my newest floor map which was bought just a few days ago. I particular, I would like to suggest that if the pipe made some more extension up to reach the length which can put between main

water

pipes

then

this

flows only through the main pipe and may not annoyed to any rooms. Please let me know if you are busy with your work,

then

I can help these things to make it happen on your behalf.

However

, I cannot wait more than two days while my temper has been reaching the maximum plus I have already prepared to take any action with the condo committee. Looking forward to hearing from you with immediate responses. Yours faithfully, Honey Linn

Submitted by hnylinn on Fri Nov 05 2021

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