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Some people think that your community would be a good place to locate the university. Compare the advantages and disadvantages of establishing a new university in your community. Use specific details in your discussion.

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In some cases, there is a heated discussion surrounding the issue of whether it is a good idea to locate a
university
 in the
community
, proponents of establishing argue that
university
 in that area saves
people
's time and cost of transportation and
also
 provides an opportunity to use the modern library and computer and science classes. Opponents state that it leads to hazardous traffic problems and increased housing rent. I agree with the idea that despite some benefits of building the
university
 in our
community
, there are could be a detrimental effect.
To begin
 with, setting up the
university
 in our
community
 has several benefits.
First
 of all, it saves
people
's time that they used for transportation and now they can spend it on important affairs.
Furthermore
,
students
 are able to use everything that the
university
 offers
such
 as the library and computer classes. I think it is a good chance for
students
, who can not be owning these items.
Nonetheless
, the new
university
 brings disadvantages. A new construction obviously creates a lot of noise and traffic jams. Because of it,
people
 can experience difficulties in reaching their jobs in time. And
then
 they may suffer due to lack of parking spaces.
Moreover
, due to establishing a new
university
 may notice a sharp rise in rental prices. So it seems that it becomes impossible for
students
, especially
first
-year
students
.
In addition
, the new construction may lead to a different kind of noise. Many young
people
 in our
community
 can cause more noise, especially in the evenings. To sum up I would like to say that
university
 in a communal place is not a pragmatic approach and will increase
people
 woes.
Therefore
, education institutions should be in the suburbs of cities to cater to large numbers of
students
 efficiently and effectively. It will
also
 ensure smooth working of traffic and other services. Considering all these, I would oppose the establishment of a new
university
 in my
community
.
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