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It is impossible to help all people in the world, so governments should only focus on people in their own countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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There are an enormous population of
people
 in the world and it is difficult and impossible to help all the poor population on Earth. Numerous governments can not help other
countries
 and they have to focus on their own
people
 and
countries
.
To begin
 with, there are numerous poor
countries
 in the world and
that is
 impossible for the international union organisation to help all of them.
Therefore
, it is a duty to developed and developing
countries
 to pay money to that poor
countries
 for helping their
people
.
In addition
, the national governments have approaches to help their
people
 rather than other
countries
. In point of my view, I disagree with
this
 reason. I suppose each
people
 from each
countries
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 when need
to
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help, all of the humans must help them immediately.
For instance
 in African
countries
, we can see the poverty and extended poor situations between their
people
. The united states of America and some other developed
countries
 are helping them to expand charities to help their
people
.
For example
, in ,Uganda they built an international charity to extend their schools and help their girls to progress their situation.
Secondly
, It is possible for all
countries
 to build an international bank to receive money to help poor
countries
. Whereas some wealthy
countries
such
 as the USA and Qatar and some European's
countries
 can improve the unstable situations in their
countries
. To conclude
this
 essay, the International Union organisation can get taxes from rich
countries
 for paying loans to poor
countries
 and each government will be improved when has a program and timetable for improving the level of
people
's life. It depends on their future decisions.
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