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Once children start school, teachers have more influence than parents on their intellectual and social development. Do you agree or disagree?

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Schooling is an important part of a
child
's life and it moulds the
child
 to become a man. I agree that tutors have a great impact on their students physically and publically. The duties of
teacher
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 are neither few nor small, but they elevate the mind and shape the character.
Firstly
, the main reason behind
this
 is because the little one has working parents. They even can't prepare their offspring for
institution
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the institution
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 and check their daily routine after school. Whereas, the teachers attending them in school are kindhearted and loving. They act as a role model for learners and they try to follow them. In
this
 way, the leadership of
tutor
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 comes into play.
For example
, there are 2 teachers to 10 students in kindergarten.
Moreover
, more than half of families have both parents on daily wages.
Secondly
, when a
child
 is born parents set their ambition high.
As a result
, when children join the school spend most of their time in it.
Moreover
, there are numerous academies playing their role in achieving a
child
's goals. So, the more time you spend in a place influences you the most.
For example
, a sociologist performed an experiment in which he places one
child
 in solitary and another in
open
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the open
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 world. The result of
this
 experiment was that the
child
 in
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open
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the open
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 world has more social skills than the other one. Bringing
this
 to an end, a teacher is
ones
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one
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,
spiritual
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a spiritual
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 father. So, when children start schooling teachers play an inevitable role in their nourishing rather its social or mental skills.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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