The growth of online shopping will one day lead all shops in towns and cities closing.
Online shopping is a trend which has got its popularity in recent years and it will definitely one day lead to all
shops
in towns, nearby cities and possibly will extend to country sides
Correct your spelling
countrysides
also
to some extent.
This
is a very interesting topic of discussion which asks that if online shopping which is done on E-commerce
platforms
will lead all shops
in town and answer is already mentioned above which is yes. This
can be supported by below
reasoning
There are various Correct article usage
the below
E-commerce
platforms
have
come forward for online shopping like amazon, Correct pronoun usage
that have
flipkart
, eBay to facilitate online shopping, which has made users very easy to order the Change the capitalization
Flipkart
products
in very less
time and with very optimal effort.
These Correct quantifier usage
little
E-commerce
platforms
have lot
of Change the article
a lot
customer friendly
policy which has made online shopping very reliable and safe. For most of the Add a hyphen
customer-friendly
products
these Add a comma
,products
platforms
offer return
policy and very supportive Add an article
a return
after sales
service. Many local Add a hyphen
after-sales
shops
do not have flexibility
of Add an article
the flexibility
this
level for this
kind of customer friendly
service, Add a hyphen
customer-friendly
specially
when it comes to returning Replace the word
especially
of
the product.
Change preposition
apply
E-commerce
platform has done Add an article
The E-commerce
lot
of Change the article
a lot
tie ups
with various logistics partners and many places they have developed their own logistic chain which Add a hyphen
tie-ups
are
very reliable and Change the verb form
is
thus
they are able to ship products
in almost all part of cities or even beyond that in a reasonable time line
.
Correct your spelling
timeline
E-commerce
platform
Fix the agreement mistake
platforms
also
have
Change the verb form
has
tie ups
with various banking and financial institutions which not only provide a very good discount but Add a hyphen
tie-ups
also
many times offer flexible EMI payment options and many times these EMI options are interest free
. Add a hyphen
interest-free
This
is something most of the shops
even are not able to offer.
Earlier online shopping was limited to products
only but today it has extended its horizon to grocery and various medical essentials. Further
, today we can also
order various kind
of services Fix the agreement mistake
kinds
also
online like massage, hair grooming and personal care treatment.
Online shopping is modern
era of shopping which is becoming omnipresence and it will definitely lead to all Add an article
the modern
shops
in towns but nevertheless
there will be some of the people, who will still love to Add a comma
,nevertheless
classic
way of shopping which is going Add an article
the classic
in to
Join the words
into
shops
and feel the product before actually buying but that numbers will be less in future.Submitted by shravan30999 on
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