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In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing,. What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?

#countries #weight #people #levels #health #fitness #measures
Now a days
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people
 are reluctant towards their health and fitness that causes
increase
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an increase
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 in their
weight
 which
inturn
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in turn
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 have
adverse
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an adverse
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affect
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 on their productivity.in some
countries
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,countries
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 the average
weight
 gain of
people
 is seen to be increasing day by day. There are many reasons for
increasing
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the increasing
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 average
weight
 of
people
such
 as
sedantary
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sedentary
 lifestyle,stressful work and eating lots of junk foods.due to fast pace life and highly stressful jobs
people
donot
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do not
don't
 get time to exercise.They spend more time
in
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 gadgets and social media so
basically
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 they are becoming couch
potato
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now a days
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nowadays
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that
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decreases
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 their body metabolism and
increases
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 their
weight
 drastically. childhood obesity is
also
 a result of less physical activity in
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children
children's
childrens
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children
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.they avoid outdoor games and indulge more in mobile games and
in
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 laptops. Another reason for
increase
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the increase
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 in
weight
 gain is unhealthy eating like going to restaurants frequently and having fast food
instead
 of freshly
home cooked
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 food. In order to avoid frequent
weight
 gain and to remain fit and healthy
people
 should adopt
healthy
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a healthy
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 lifestyle. They should prefer walking or riding
bicycle
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a bicycle
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instead
 of using cars and bikes.
People
 should include physical activities like
runing
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running
, swimming, yoga and meditations in their daily routine and indulge in outdoor sports like cricket, badminton etc.
People
 should prepare their own food at home with fresh vegetables and include more healthy foods in their diet.
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concluding
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 I would like to reiterate that health is the most important asset and one should
chnage
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change
 their lifestyle and eating habits in order to have
normal
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weight
 which is very important to prevent diseases like diabetes, hypertension and other heart ailments. Good health of
people
 is very important for
growth
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the growth
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 of societies and country too.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • sedentary
  • obesity
  • overweight
  • physical activity
  • sedentary lifestyle
  • exercise
  • unhealthy diet
  • fast food
  • urbanization
  • modernization
  • stress
  • awareness
  • education
  • government intervention
  • policies
  • promotion
  • sports
  • fitness programs
  • health education
  • taxation
  • public transportation
  • infrastructure
  • parks
  • recreational spaces
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