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Some people think that children should learn to read from traditional paper books, while others feel that it is fine to start the reading process on an e-reader (like a Kindle or iPad). Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

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Some people argued that offsprings have to refer to hard papers to study while others believe toddlers should use new technologies to read the articles. In
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 essay I will examine both viewpoints, in , the conclusion I will state my opinion. Learning with traditional papers novels are with along time practice that passed from generation to generation. If we look at the
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 of learning using paper it makes children value a book, and they learn how to take care of it as papers will tare and damaged quickly.
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 when they have complete reading, it can be shared with others who has the same interest. When it comes to cons, it would have a higher cost to own a good book , ware and tare are much greater and it will increase the carbon foot-mark since trees are taken down in the process of papermaking.
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, e-readers have their own
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 and cons. For example for
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, it has much easier access for books as we can download them directly to the device and cutting down trees will be much lesser. while we have the above
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 the cons are, loose touch and feel of the books and minimizing the care for the book and sharing experience. In conclusion, I will be agreeing with learning using e-readers, as it has a lesser impact on the environment. and ensures easier access.
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