One of your friends wants to apply for a job at a summer school camp as a sports trainer. Write a letter to the camp manager to recommend your friend. In your letter: say how well you know your friend describe the qualifications and experience that your friend has explain why your friend would be suitable for this job.
Dear Mr.Sean,
Hope you are doing great.I am writing with regard to the
sports
trainer job opportunity for Summer school
. I saw this
job vacancy on the hallway board and sent it to my friend who is looking for the same job.
My friend Sara is a great sports
coach and she has very good experience in this
field. She is my childhood friend and we met when we were in school
. we spend a lot of time together and at weekends I go to the gym with her as she is a professional coach and she can help me to be fit with excellent instructions.
Sara has been working in this
area since high school
and she got a bachelor's degree as a sports
teacher, then
she continued her studies and got a master's degree. she has done research and written more than 10 articles about the role of sports
in children's lives.Furthermore
, she is working in two gyms as a head trainer.
I believe that Sara can be a great choice because not only she has great knowledge but she has incredible talent in this
field, and I'm sure it can help us to attract more children to summer camp and in this
way, we can develop our summer school
camp plans.
I look forward to receiving your response.
yours faithfully
Marzieh BanigSubmitted by ghazale
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coherence cohesion
Ensure the letter has a clear and logical structure with an introduction, body paragraphs, and a conclusion. Opening and closing the letter with appropriate salutations can significantly improve the score.
greeting and closing
Adhere to the basics of letter writing: Greet the recipient appropriately and sign off the letter formally, matching the nature of the letter.
coherence cohesion
Each paragraph should be focused on a single idea, and the letter should smoothly transition from one idea to the next.
task achievement
Fully respond to all the bullet points mentioned in the task. Elaborate on each point sufficiently, ensuring detail and relevance to the main topic.
task achievement
Maintain a tone that is appropriate for the letter's purpose. In this case, the tone should be formal and persuasive, underscoring the recommendation you are providing.