Some peoplesay that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Music

plays an important part in our lives. There is no doubt about

this

.

However

, many individuals feel it is a good way to bring citizens of various cultures together, whilst others believe it doesn't. In the course of

this

essay, we shall look at both sides of

this

coin.

First

and foremost, we shall look at the view of how melodies bring communities together.

Music

is a universal language and transcends cultures and borders. It is something that brings crowds from all walks of life together.

For example

, I am currently living in Trivandrum for the

last

14 years and even though I have never listened to Malayalam songs prior to relocating here, some of my favourite songs are from

this

language.

Furthermore

, the Rio carnival held in Rio De Janeiro is a classic example of

this

, as it attracts citizens from numerous countries annually.

On the other hand

, persons believe that

music

from a certain culture belongs to that particular civilization and it cannot be celebrated by tourists, primarily because they do not understand the ballads and the meaning of the song. An instance of

this

would be that of the traditional Onam celebrations in Trivandrum. Every year it draws in many foreigners from various countries who come and view and try to take part in the festivities. Unfortunately, because of the language barriers associated

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they often feel left out. In conclusion, I feel

music

indeed defies all nations and races and it is the one factor that brings generations together. Nationals can use

this

as an opportunity to get to know other citizens, and in

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cultures can be introduced to various societies. As the famous song goes, "Rhythm is going to get you".