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In many countries, school have severe problems with student behavior. What do you think are causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

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The Covid 19 pandemic is a problem for all of humanity, it not only affects people's daily lives but
also
 causes other activities to be suspended or halted. Similar to education in Vietnam, universities are required to accept
students
 to study online
instead
 of having to go to
campus
 as usual and it makes a difference in
students
' daily lives.
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 understanding of the matter. Online learning brings more comfort to
students
instead
 of going to
school
. If
students
 can study online at home, they will have more
time
 to sleep in the morning.
Teachers
 will teach
students
 who always wake up late when studying online.
Students
 will not need to spend
time
 commuting from home to
school
 and
moreover
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 they can wear the most comfortable clothes when studying online.
This
 brings a positive side that
students
 can absorb the lesson better when they are completely comfortable. It helps
students
 easily absorb the lecture and understand the knowledge quickly. From those impacts, online learning can partly help many
students
 improve their learning results in a better and more effective way.
Moreover
, online learning helps
students
 to be more active in the lesson than studying at
school
. Many
students
, when they attend
school
, don't understand
lessons
, they choose either quiet or ask friends
instead
 of asking
teachers
.
However
, when learning online,
students
 are often
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 in talking directly with
teachers
 about the
lessons
 they are having problems with. Being more active in the
lessons
 helps both
teachers
 and
students
 impart knowledge in the best way, thereby bringing more effective results than expected.
However
, face-to-face learning at
school
 brings many other positive aspects compared to online learning. It can be said that it is the communication ability of
students
. Online learning is almost a conversation between an individual student and a teacher. They do not have
time
 for communication and exchange with each other. But
this
 can be done at the
school
campus
.
Students
 can meet each other anywhere or at any
time
 and communicate with each other in the
school
.
This
 is to develop
students'
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 communication skills and
dealing
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 with people. Obviously, it is not possible to develop
such
 a skill through online learning.
On the other hand
, studying on
campus
 helps
teachers
 better understand their
students
 because they can observe
students
 during
lessons
.
Teachers
 can see which
students
 are having problems with their subjects if they are taught on
campus
instead
 of online. The benefit of
this
 aspect is very good when
teachers
 can help
students
 overcome
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 of knowledge in the subject or problems related to the lecture. In conclusion, studying online or studying on
campus
 has both positive and negative aspects.
However
, during the epidemic, people should adapt to online methods because they may have to use them for a long
time
.
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