The Internet has made a positive impact on our life. Do you agree or disagree?

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In today's modern era, nobody can imagine life without the
internet
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. The
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totally changed our lifestyle. All humans are dependent on computers.
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makes our life easier. I am partially agreed
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the given notion. In my perspective, it has more advantages
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disadvantages. In the following, paragraphs we will discuss in detail. At the
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glance, through social
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everyone feels connected. To explain it, the majority of people have their own social
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accounts
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where they can upload their daily routine tasks
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as images or videos.
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, if someone is living abroad, he or she can talk to their parents through video calls on Whatsapp or via other applications.
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, they feel they are talking with them
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face to face.
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to it, the
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is a great source of knowledge. To illustrate it, students can find study materials by surfing the
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at any time or from any corner of the world.
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, it provides not only
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it is
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very useful for entertainment like, playing video games or watching movies or doing shopping.
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having beneficial factors, it
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has some demerits.
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, adults and children are using it all day as they
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to it. Which is not good for their health.
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, no doubt they learn many things from the
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but from the long ,use they develop health issues i.e. obesity, weak eyesight and slow brain and so on. Another most important negative point is false
information
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. Sometimes, users put wrong
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on
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internet
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that may cause fraud or
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to others. In conclusion, the
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is a wider platform where you can find any
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, play games, video calls, online shopping or chat at very low rates. But be careful of false
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and parents should limit the time for their children and keep an eye on their search history to avoid any loss.
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