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You want to sell some of your furniture. You think a friend of yours might like to buy it from you. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter -explain why you are selling -describe the furniture -suggest a date when your friend can come and see the furniture

#furniture #friend #-explain #-describe #-suggest #date
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Dear Sara, I’m writing to you about your interest related to my outdated
furniture
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 that I prefer to sell at a hugely discounted price. My plan is to shift to Italy and force myself to sell my
furniture
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, which is apparently heavy.
In addition
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, I can buy back from you in case I decide to come back to the UK again.
Therefore
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, you can be benefited by using these in the meantime. About the
furniture
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, my
furniture
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 has two
king size
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king-size
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 beds, three pieces of leather sofa, two pieces of
chest
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the chest
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, and six pieces of chairs. These are about four years old, which cost me over $5000 from numerous
furniture
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 stores. About your visit, As you’re aware that I’ve been so busy recently cause of
this
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 change;
therefore
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, I’m requesting you to visit my flat
this
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 Thursday around 3pm. I’ve arranged and cleaned all the stuff for you to
pick-up
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pick up
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 if you agree with the rock-bottom price. I’m awaiting your response in case you can’t manage
time
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your time
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. All the best! Ryan Smith
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Decluttering
  • Stylish
  • Contemporary
  • Vintage
  • Well-maintained
  • Sturdy
  • Comfortable
  • Elegant
  • Sentimental value
  • Matching set
  • Space-saving
  • Ergonomic
  • Inspection
  • Negotiable
  • Convenient
  • Interested
  • Memories attached
  • Home decor
  • Solid wood
  • Affordable
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