You have recently moved to a different city. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: • Explain why you decided to move to a different city • Describe the new city and accommodation • Ask your friend to arrange a visit

Dear Stephen, I'm writing to you to inform
that
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you that
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my decision to relocate
in
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to
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a new town has happened as per my plan. My regular commuting using fast train was expensive in the 1st month of my employment;
therefore
, I'd few options left, but to change my current place.
Besides
communication, my private life was tormented as my ex-girlfriend decided to move on with her life. My new metropolis has various sorts of transportation and living facilities as well. You can travel to work by using
three-wheeler
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a three-wheeler
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, bus, rail, and personal
car
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care
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if you can
afford
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itafford
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.
Moreover
, living is quite cheap here as you can hire a studio flat below $300 per month. I'll encourage you for a trip to my town in
Easter
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the Easter
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holidays, which is approaching in the
next
month. My house has plenty of room for you, and there are some
historical
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places to experience in my view. So, you'll not be frustrated for sure. All the Best! Ryan Smith
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