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The graph illustrates the comparison of international tourists in 5 different parts of the world from 1990 to 2005. One particular fact highlighted by the figure is that the number of tourists increased through all 5 parts of the world in 15 years. Central and Eastern Europe, the
second
-highest in the graph, showed the extreme increase through 15 years given.
On the other hand
, North America, the highest in
the
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number of international guests, decreased from 2000 to 2005. South-East Asia, Sub-Saharan Africa and South America illustrated the constant increase.
However
, they raised constantly, but it was not as steep as Central and Eastern Europe. With regard to the number of foreign guests each year, the countries mentioned
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vary
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 differently. Varied 8
million
 to 72
million
 in 1990, the interval increased to 15
million
 to 88
million
 in 2005. By the ranking, the lowest in 1990, Sub-Saharan Africa, ran to the fourth place in 2005.
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 the fact that Sub-Saharan Africa's increase, the rest of the four countries remained their seats.
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