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The number of elderly people in the world is increasing. What do you think are the positive and negative effects of this trend?

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In today society, in some
countries
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 the number of elderly people in the world is increasing.It is true that the issue has some positive and negative but
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 believe it has more drawbacks, which will be discussed in depth in the following essay. The
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 to be said is
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 trend has the potential to be beneficial to society.The elder generations,without a doubt, have more experience and expertise in certain areas than the younger generation.
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teacher
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 will have more experience in teaching and imparting to students, they can take care of the babies for young parents.
Besides
 that, they can guide the youth generations.
On the other hand
,the fee of health medication will increase and more pressure.Most of
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 needs and fee are coming in old age so
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 need
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 more money to take care
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 people.It’s true that
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having more elderly individuals reduces a country economic growth, there will be
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 of youthful workers. From these arguments,one
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most
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 conclude that,while there are benefits to having an
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 society,it is obvious that the population can reduce a country economy and increase health problems.Overall,l believe that having a high population of elderly people is harmful to any country.
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