Mrs Barrett, an English-speaking woman who lives in your town, has advertised for someone to help her in her home for a few hours a day next summer. Write a letter to Mrs Barrett. In your letter suggest how you could help her in her home say why you would like to do this work explain when you will and will not be available

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Dear Mrs Bhrrett, I am writing to you about the advertisement I saw, in which you said you need someone who can help you in your house next

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for a few hours a day

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a few things that you renovating and I think I might be a good helper for you to do

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thing as I have my

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holidays at that time. So, I can be a good fit for

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, I want to do

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work because I am studying home renovation.

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, I think

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is a good opportunity for me to I can gain some hands-on experience, as well I earn some sort of money during my

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vacation, which will help me in my next semester. In terms of availability, I am free almost every day as I have my

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break at that time, but I will not be available during the weekends as I have to do my final semester project. If

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time suits you, I am glad to work with you. Thanks and Regards, Parth Suhagiya

udaysuhagiya2Sat Apr 19 2025

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language

Make sure to proofread your letter for spelling mistakes, such as 'Bhrrett' instead of 'Barrett'.

coherence

Organize your letter into clear paragraphs, each focusing on a single idea more effectively. For example, use a separate paragraph for availability.

task achievement

Use more formal language and a polite tone. For instance, 'I would be pleased to assist you' instead of 'I might be a good helper for you'.

content

You mentioned your motivation for wanting to work and how it relates to your studies, which adds depth to your letter.

content

Your intent to gain hands-on experience shows enthusiasm and relevance for the task.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

179 words

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Domestic chores
Culinary skills
Horticulture
Cultural immersion
Work ethic
Flexible schedule
Time management
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