Write a letter to your friend from a different country. Invite him/ her to a party at your home and include the following: - what the party is about - give directions how to get to your place - suggest how to accommodate him/ her

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Dear Anna, I hope you are doing amazing. I am pleased to invite you to my parent's 25th wedding anniversary party. It has been so long to see you after college is over. On December 10th , my family is planning to throw a surprise party for my parents on their anniversary. We are

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planning to have a dress code of black and white clothes .It will be a different experience for you. In fact, we are left with just one week only. So without any

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delay try to book your air tickets as soon as possible . Even try to get a direct flight from Thailand to Delhi. It would be more convenient for you. I will send a cab for you at the airport. I would like to tell you to not worry about your accommodation. I already had a talk with my uncle and aunt about your stay and they vacant a room for you. It would be amazing to have you here with me. Eagerly waiting to see you. Convey regards to your parents. Yours lovingly Manvir Kaur

Submitted by Manvir kaur bhatti on Sun Nov 07 2021

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

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8 paragraphs

184 words

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Write a letter to your friend from a different country. Invite him/ her to a party at your home and include the following: - what the party is about - give directions how to get to your place - suggest how to accommodate him/ her

People these days watch TV, films and other programmes alone rather than with other people. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

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