You have recently moved to a different house, and you want to give the news to an English-speaking friend who lives in another country. Write a letter to this English-speaking friend. In your letter, explain why you have moved describe the new house invite your friend to come and visit

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Dear Jessica, Hope you are doing fine. I was glad to hear from you

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month. I would like to let you know that I have moved to a new residence

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week. As you are well aware of the challenges that I faced with respect to travelling to work at my previous place. I was finding it difficult to reach on time as it was very far from my office. so I got in touch with an agency which helped me to relocate here. Though it is expensive when compared to the previous house, it offers convenience for me to commute to work and make things easier. It has a huge foyer with a beautiful garden and includes one living room, two spacious bedrooms and an open kitchen.

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, the view from the balcony is extremely pretty. Why don't you come round

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weekend and see what you think of our new place? My family and I would love to see you and if the weather is good we can have a barbecue in the garden. Looking forward to seeing you soon! Warm wishes, Farhana Jabeen

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

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8 paragraphs

187 words

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