A large company in your area has decided to spend amount of money,either to sponsor a local children's sports team for two years or to pay for two open-air concerts.It has asked for feed back general public. write a letter to the company .in your letter -describe the benefits of sponsoring the sports team -summerise the benefits of paying for the concert. -say how you think to send the money
#company #area #amount #money #sponsor #children #sports #team #two #years #concerts #-describe #-summerise #concert #-say
Dear Sir,
I hope
this
email finds you in good health. I am writing this
letter to share my feedback about spending money either for a sports
team
or an open-air concert in our area.
Firstly
, I would like to describe a sports
team
which is formed by local children. Although
this
team
has been organizing their sports
-related instruments in their own way, it is really difficult for them at present to bear the daily expenses. Therefore
, I would like to suggest sponsoring this
team
for the next two years and this
is because children will be motivated to be good sports
person in the future.
Secondly
, there are not enough places for recreation in this
area which is why sometimes people living in this
area ask for an open-air concert, especially during the winter season. However
, this
concert arrangement will not only entertain the local people but also
help them to be peaceful mentally.
Finally
, in my perspective, I would like to suggest investing the money in the sports
team
as it will help the children to make their dream true for a long time.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Mike TysonSubmitted by faisalmahamood on
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