Globalization is positive for economies but its negative sides should not be ignored. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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In recent years, companies prefer to work in different countries and foreign employees are hired from various areas and
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they could expand their profits. I personally agree that being active in diverse parts of the world has significant benefits for the financial state and in the
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of all, when a company has numerous branches around the world, it could have access to a variety of resources, some of which might not be available in its location. Corporations who have the dream of becoming the best ones need unlimited resources including natural and humans.
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, they should spread their branches in a place that have the desirable potential to be used.
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, these potentials should be untouchable and
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they could win them without any problems.
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, MC Donald buys some lands that native people did not pay attention to them in order to cultivate vegetables.
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, when a business enters a new place, it could gain new knowledge and experiences from local people via hiring and trading. If a business opens a new store in a foreign place it is better to hire local individuals in order to find out about that part.
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, communications with residents would become smoother since indigenous inhabitants would feel closer to them.
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, cosmetics brands would employ native marketers in order to raise their sales. To summarize, I believe that natural and humane resources in each part of our planet could help a corporation to gain more revenues.
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, sharing experiences and cooperations would support the financial state of a business.
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