1. In some cultures old age is more valued, while in other cultures youth is more valued. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is argued that in some
nations
' beliefs, mature people
are precious but, in contrast
, others believe that young adults are worthy. This
essay agrees that the old generation
has a higher place of respect.
on one hand, in many cultures old people
are treated more respectfully and more worthy because of their values for communities. Mature people
not only have abundant experiences about life and ways of living in a great manner but also
they are representing the society historical backgrounds to other nations
. It is therefore
agreed that grandparents can transfer their valuable experiences to youngsters which are useful for their future to not get into possible future pitfalls. For example
, Iran is one of the countries
around the world where young adults are trying to imitate their grandparents in every area of their life because they believe that the old generation
's advice would help them to follow the success path constantly.
on the other hand
, other nations
have been investing in the young generation
. the vast majority of developed countries
have been looking into some ways for their own improvement in every area which has profit for them, so, they will pay much more attention to youth assets rather than mature ones. Abandoning the previous generations for reaching high profit is not only acceptable morally but also
those people
could work along with younger ones at same quality. For instance
, in Turkey, most carpenters are more than 58 years old because this
type of work is not one of the jobs that most people
will be master in a short period of time.
in conclusion, it is always a battle between the countries
where matures are considered as a valuable asset and countries
where youth people
are the most precious ones. Although
young generations are vital for the future of countries
, old generation
with their plentiful experiences will always have more benefits for nations
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