The number of elderly people in the world is increasing. What do you think are the positive and negative effects of this trend?

Nowadays, the

number

of elderly

people

in the world is increasing. It is a problem to pay attention

.

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There are several positives and negatives of

this

trend.

To begin

with, as far as home life, one obvious disadvantage is young adults increasingly have to look after elderly relatives, a greater tax burden for working adults (governments will receive less money in taxes in relation to the population size).

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, the

number

of

ederly

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elderly

are

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not working maybe since they are retired, so the cost of care increases but there are not enough younger

people

to pay taxes. Another drawback of

this

trend is the economy. The

number

of elderly

is increase

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will create enormous demands on a nation's health service.

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, the elderly will

increased

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increase

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chances

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the chances

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of the elderly getting serious illnesses, increasing

demand

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the demand

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for medical treatment.

On the other hand

, one benefit associated with

this

for

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young

people

to

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benefit from the experience of older minds.

For example

, when young

people

have problems, they need advice from someone older than them and can learn more from them. Not only that, if the

number

of elderly increases, it can strengthen family bonds because the

prossibility

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possibility

of quarrels will be less. If a country has a substantial

number

of elderly

people

it can be

affect

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more as in underdeveloped or poor countries the elderly will be seen as their burden because they do not have enough money to pay taxes and care

cost

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costs

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. In general, the problem is negative but not worry and the

number

of elderly

people

increase

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but

also

helps the community.