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the process for recycling plastic bottles and the advantage of its process.

The given diagram illustrates the process of recycling
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bottles
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. Overall, there are nine stages in the process, beginning with
plastic
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bottles
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 being thrown away and producing the product. According to the diagram, it can be seen that the
plastic
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bottles
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 were thrown away by the people. These
bottles
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 are
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 kept by a garbage truck, followed
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, it is sent to a recycling centre to sort them.
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, it was compressed into large blocks and
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 it was crushed by the crushing machine into smaller pieces and cleaned by a washing machine. In the subsequent stage, these small
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 pieces were turned into
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 pellets. They are heated into raw material, followed by the raw material are packed.
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, they are delivered to producing various products.

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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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