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Some people think computer and internet are important in children's study , but other think students can learn effectively in school and with teachers . Discuss both sides and give your own opinion .

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People give different kinds of interpretations on
this
 affair . Some people say
students
 can gain knowledge by using computers and the
internet
 .
On the other hand
 , some individuals say it's better for
students
 to achieve knowledge at
school
 with the help of
teachers
 . I shall put forth my argument to support my view in the following paragraph .
First
 of all , I want to say It has advantages and disadvantages , as nowadays a lot of advanced technology's have been invented and people are able to use these devices like , the computer which has changed our lives and made our lives easier and comfortable . Pupils can study using the computer and the
internet
 , when they face a difficult question they can smoothly search on the
internet
 and get the answer
also
 on the
internet
 there have many platforms of education from here they can learn . Nowadays with the help of
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internet
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 remote areas
students
 can take part in many skilful
teachers
 classes.
Secondly
 , there have some disadvantages like , sometimes pupils become addicted to the
internet
 and they play different kinds of games and mobile or computer screen light which is harmful
for
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 our eyes . Sometimes they visit some violent website which is harmful
for
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 them . On the other side , In my opinion , it will be secure and beneficial if
students
 learn at
school
 from their
teachers
 .
School
 is the best learning environment and
students
 can get proper information about their questions from
teachers
 ,
Also
students
 can learn practically at
school
 . To sum up , I think in remote areas
students
 can learn using the
internet
 but those who have the opportunity to go to
school
 they should go to
school
 .
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