Some people think computer and internet are important in children's study , but other think students can learn effectively in school and with teachers . Discuss both sides and give your own opinion .

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affair . Some people say

students

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can gain knowledge by using computers and the

internet

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.

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, some individuals say it's better for

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to achieve knowledge at

school

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with the help of

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. I shall put forth my argument to support my view in the following paragraph .

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of all , I want to say It has advantages and disadvantages , as nowadays a lot of advanced technology's have been invented and people are able to use these devices like , the computer which has changed our lives and made our lives easier and comfortable . Pupils can study using the computer and the

internet

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, when they face a difficult question they can smoothly search on the

internet

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and get the answer

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on the

internet

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there have many platforms of education from here they can learn . Nowadays with the help of

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remote areas

students

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can take part in many skilful

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classes.

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, there have some disadvantages like , sometimes pupils become addicted to the

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and they play different kinds of games and mobile or computer screen light which is harmful

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our eyes . Sometimes they visit some violent website which is harmful

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them . On the other side , In my opinion , it will be secure and beneficial if

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learn at

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from their

teachers

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.

School

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is the best learning environment and

students

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can get proper information about their questions from

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,

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students

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can learn practically at

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. To sum up , I think in remote areas

students

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can learn using the

internet

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but those who have the opportunity to go to

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they should go to

school

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.