Some people believe that comic books are trash and they waste our children’s time and energy. What is your opinion?

In the contemporary era, it is often argued that
this
is a negative that
children
ought to read relaxation
books
and it is a waste of time, whilst others disagree with that point of view. In my opinion, youngsters should not be restricted to
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certain
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of
books
because both
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pastime and educational
books
serve the purpose of imparting positive skills
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children
. It is clear that,
first
and foremost, some parents think that
children
should be motivated to
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educational
books
, and it
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adults age. They think that knowledge and useful information helps
children
with their studies and future progress.
For instance
, academic
books
provide relevant and real information about the world which eventually enables
children
to explore the globe.
Furthermore
, I have to admit that the role of serious
books
on kids’ intellectual growth is crucial and
hence
, undeniable.
However
, many disagree and feel that
comics
, short stories and
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not
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only for fun. The stories and the incidents narrated in that
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provides
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a vivid imagination and creativity for the minors.
For instance
, juveniles know about helping weak people by reading
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Batman and Spiderman, know that being smart is cool by reading The Iron Man
comics
.
Moreover
, some science
books
are very boring, and
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getting information throw
comics
on how CO2 converts to the O are boosting the interest of scholars to be educated and become voracious reader in the future.
Comics
are perfect to grasp ideas easily, whereas academic texts consist
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plenty of technical terms. To conclude, while benefits of reading entertaining
books
helps to develop
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mind, some still feel that only educational
books
are useful for
children
’s intelligence and study skills.
However
, as long as pastime
books
not
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considered to be a waste of time, vice versa as an addition to overall knowledge about the world, the benefits are clearly positive.
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