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In order to study at university students are required to pay expensive tuition fees. Not all students can afford them so some people think that university education should be free for everyone. To what extent do you agree?

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Universities have been charging an exorbitant amount of money from their candidates. While a few people can afford them there a plenty of people who find it difficult to pay
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 a high sum of money.
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 it's impossible for an educational institution to give free learning to all, I think they should consider low fees or even scholarships to students who have very high scores. On one hand, the cost of learning has been increasing tremendously over the
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 few years and there are only a handful of people who are able to afford
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 high costs. Despite the high potential, there are students who have to forgo their dream of studying in big educational institutions simply because they are unable to afford them. Universities like Oxford or Harvard have huge tuition fees and
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 check our family asset value. These criteria's will not help a pupil from a normal family and even though he/she is extremely qualified he will have to choose tier 2 or tier 3 colleges.
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, it's impossible for universities to give free education to all. There are a number of livelihoods dependent on those student fees, staff needs to be paid, the university will have to take care of their administration activities and there are other expenses as well. They will have to come up with a low fee structure or scholarships programmes for highly qualified pupils
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 helping the deserving ones. In my opinion, I'd strongly disagree that the university education should be free for everyone as its simply impossible. They should come up with other methods like scholarship programmes so that education is affordable for everyone and the deserving candidates are being recognized
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 making it a fair process.
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