Some people think that schools should reward students who show the best academic results, while others believe that it is more important to reward students who show improvements. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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should recompense pupils who have the best academic performance or if they should commend students on having significant progress. In

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give my own opinion on the matter. On the one side of the argument, there are people who believe that it is worth remunerating the undergraduate who obtain the highest score. As the matter of fact,

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environment that will keep learners studying hard and motivate them to acquire more and more knowledge.

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, it is a big helpful thing for many poor students and by having won prizes in school make them active in studies.

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, in many big educational institutions in Vietnam, prominent pupils got a lot of benefits from their performance

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better opportunities in future, scholarships.

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, it is necessary for schools and colleges to encourage the undergraduate who

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creates students' interest in learning.

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, because of wanting to get a prize, these learners would invest more time and effort into their studies, which is likely to gradually increase their fascination for academic disciplines.

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, the score will get higher

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time the improvement will go much higher than the previous one. In conclusion, certainly, the rewards are becoming an important part of every success.

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academic performer or the improver. In my opinion, I think both are the right ways to motivate the learns towards their study.