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The internet has dramatically altered our lives over the past few decades. Altough some of these changes have been negative, the overall effect of this technology has been positive What are your opinion on this?

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The
internet
 has significantly changed our lives for the
last
 few years.
Eventhough
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 some of
this
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 alternations have been positive, the overall
imfact
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impact
 of
this
 development has been negative. I personally think that
internet
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 is beneficial for us. There
are
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 two primary
reason
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 which
are
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 associated
better
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communicate
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communication
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 and quality education. In
this
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 I intend to discuss both views.
First
 of all, I completely
beleive
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believe
 that the
internet
 is effective to communicate with our loved ones. Put more simply, the
internet
 connection is the easiest way to communicate with their loved ones.
As a result
, we can save
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 amount of money and time using the
internet
 for our lives
everyday
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. One of the perfect examples of
this
 is that almost everyone in the world uses
facebook
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massanger
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messenger
 to keep in touch with their loved ones every single minute.
Secondly
 and even more
importly
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importantly
 though the
internet
 is efficient for getting
good
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 education for people.
That
is say
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is to say
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 that everyone is getting to develop for
their self
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themself
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 from
internet
 access.
Consequently
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 many
university
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universities
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 changes their routine which means before people must go to college but now we
just
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involes
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involves
on
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 their online class so we just need to
internet
 and mobile devices.
For instance
, nowadays everything
altered
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 that when people
requires
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 to study without professional tutors. So they just need to
searching
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search
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Goolgle
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Google
, Youtube, Safari etc..
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whatever
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what ever
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whatever
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 do you want
also
studied
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study
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 free with the
internet
. By the way of conclusion, I once again restate my view that the
internet
 is useful for not only better communication but
also
 quality education.
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