Shopping is now one of the most popular forms of leisure activity in many countries for young adults. What do you think is the reason for this? Is this a positive or negative development?
Nowadays, many younger adults in a lot of countries like shopping as a leisure activity. There are some reasons for
this
trend
, but I think it is a negative trend
and will explain in this
essay.
One of the reasons is that young adults spend a lot of time using social media
. In social media
, many famous people
, such
as actors, professional sports players and models. advertise the products
they use. Although
there are many advertisements on TV before appearing on social media
, the duration is much shorter than the advertisement on social media
. In addition
, famous people
can interact with customers on social media
, and they can advertise the products
more effectively. Moreover
, some of them even use hypo to attract consumers.
I believe this
is a negative trend
because it causes a decrease in exercise. These days, many people
buy products
online instead
of going to shops since it is more convenient. Therefore
, by this
trend
, they tend to stay at home and search for products
online to buy the products
they are promoted by famous people
on social media
as a leisure activity. As a result
, they may have health problems, such
as obesity and diabetes, leading to an increase in the death rate.
In conclusion, shopping becomes one of the most popular leisure activities because of the rise in the amount of time people
spend on social media
. In my opinion, it is a negative tendency since it causes health problems and heightens the death rate.Submitted by shujitakamatsu on
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